Saturday, March 20, 2021

A Star Haiku

  


A Star Haiku ⭐️ 


a twinkling pinhole
in the liner between earth
and heaven: Mom winks

8 comments:

  1. I love the ending. It has a certain calm resilience to it. Mom is gone, but not gone. There is comfort in the stars.

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    1. Thank you, Margaret! Yes, so many reasons to look to the heavens!

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  2. Your last line yes she does wink and I believe the reminder is to look to the stars for inspiration and hope.

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  3. Breathtaking, beautiful, stark, profoundly comforting and lighthearted all at once, Kim - how DO you do it, in so few words?? I understand both the far-ness and the nearness. And the love, still shining on.

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    1. Fran, thank you! The love just keeps on! I get reminders - hawks, pennies, stars, ....she still finds her ways!

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  4. Wow, like Fran said! :) I love the farness of the star and the nearness of Mom's love.

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